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I am in complete awe with how fantastic that was, really. *~* AWE *~* That said... In the sentance below you repeat 'it' a few times, it sticks out, is ...

I like this, everyone before me has presented any of the issues I could have found with it so I have only to say I likes its :D Keep it ...

Ohhhh I liked this! I had a little trouble with the flow, but nothing that hasnt been mentioned. I like how simple it was and the ease with which I ...

^.^ Thank you dear :D You should never be ashamed of your own work! Lol; I am a hypocrite and a half ehehe. Thankyou once more! *Hearts* Le Penguin

Most gratuitous thanks to you all for the commentation ^.^ The whore means what it seems to mean ;) It is an indication of the kind of betrayal that has ...

*blush* ohh Lizzy, hehe. ^.^ Thankyou all for your commentations, I shall be working on this piece as soon as I can... I have hopeful plans for extending it. All ...

[pre]The knife in my back props me up – A little marionette. For a moment I turned my back – How quickly you betrayed me. The tears slide in rivers ...

Opening credits: We Don't Care Anymore - Story of the Year First Date: Coming Home - The Tea Party Falling In Love: I Bet You Look Good On The Dancefloor ...

Tonight, I let go of you, take up your shoes, unlace them, make a Cat's Cradle-- the last such delicate world to be controlled by my fingers. I think, maybe, ...

Hehe, of course your crti was helpful, all crits and comments are. As well as being monumentally appreciated that is :D I agree about the sentance thing, one whole sentace ...

6/10 interesting but not extremely eye catching. 9/10, but only because I know (of, not personally) the artist who did your avie and I LOVE her (and, hey, I love ...

The 90's aye... hehe Daria Empire Records... My favourite movie EVER! Nirvana Harvey Danger Greenday - when they were good T.M.N.T. Captain Planet!... I have friends who will still sing ...

Aside: Hey Chocoholic; I don't know if this is important but your title is gramatically incorrect. "Who do you talk to your writing about" Should be someting like "Who do ...

That was wonderful! I loved the feeling of the poem - as one who never liked Hide and Seek all that much - *nods* most wonderous. My only issue is ...

Would Eye-dialect be anything like the symbols used to show word pronunciation and spelling? What I'm talking about is basically what Ameliais saying, except there are specific symbols used for ...