PenguinAttack

Well now, I really liked that ^.^ I, personally, don't put much stock in punctuation in poertry, not really. And I actually like the feel of the poem, how it ...

I sort of like this. Haha, that sounds silly, but I am a little confused by it all. I'm not sure if it was just me, but this was terribly ...

EEE! Lol, I loved that! It made me giggle from the second I started it! However I have a few little qualms. Most of these, all of these actually, centre ...

I quite liked this. The repetition does get a little grating by the end, but it doesn't do much to detract from the poem itself. Soft and sweet, I like ...

I don't exactly know what to think of this. While I think it is interesting you move from past tense description, or at least no dialogue, just tleling us what ...

I agree with all issues that have been raised so far, although I did find it rather hilarious you were writing about Halo3. I think that your use of Ethan ...

Ahhh LizzyG; Cliches exist because they are so very relate-able to the human being ^.^ Thus while your poem may be a cliche it is merely because it selects and ...

I like this, it is short and to the point, a little ambiguous but it doesnt take away from the meaning or from the reading - this is good ^.^ ...

Okay ^.^ To start, I am intrigued to know more, and I do like the story itself. I do, however, have some issues: You use repetition alot, while this can ...

I like this, very sweet ^.^ One problem comes here : "We had to say goodbye, They are harder than Hellos, But after a short time, I finally let you ...

In the most basic of senses, I thought I would like it, I don't think I did. I know that sounds rather indecisive but I like the concept, I even ...

I liked the concept of the piece although I think you should be wary of the dreaded cliche. It was a little stagnate, in that you decribed everything but without ...

Hehe Thanks Fan ^.^ I have changed that one bit, you were right, it sounds better like that. Thanks for the commentation, all is welcome ^.^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

I like this, a lot. Drawn in from the first image it did not dissapoint my expectations. Although I found that sometimes the run-on sentances were not necessary. Such as ...

And unto the truth did our hero set His wealth and all begotten to him Alight behind his mounted steed Whence forth his callous heart did ride The strife of ...