PenguinAttack

Everyone has heard of Hansel and Gretel; the story about the two poor little children, whose parents abandoned them in the woods and their run-in with a witch who tried ...

I have nought but love for you both for the crits ^.^ You're all legends and I thank you muchly as every comment is appreciated and I love that you ...

As they reached the edge of town, the sun was beginning to light the horizon. The rate at which the black night sky was turning to a grayish-blue color was ...

Now seventeen, the twins were still seeking a permanent safe haven from the Braeden Organization. This organization was developed to hunt down and destroy orphans. Particularly orphaned Christians. Th

Next to Markali, his twin was sitting up straight, staring at their sister sleepily. “Reakeda, I’m hungry.” The sentence is a little convoluted, I’m not sure if it’s just how ...

Rea! This is so adorably cute! I love the style and the sense of voice that it has! The rhymes were all cute and I love the gummi's and sour ...

Thankyou, my loves, for those fab comments ^.^ I'm glad that this little poem had any sort of impact. I fixed the typo, and you were right about the "made" ...

I liked this. Short and sweet ^.^ I do, however, think that you might want to sepatate this into stanza's, having the "wake up" head each stanza. I do agree ...

A wonderfully and engaging piece. As such I have given you a line by line crit. I do hope it helps ^.^ "Through the window the sun was setting in ...

Finding something of yours, Imp, that a stack of adoring fans havn't already crit to death is teribble difficult. ^.^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Firstly I address some issues ne? "Buddha didn’t seem to realise the pity it would be to stain, wet or otherwise disheval his companion’s deft appearance." Comma after "wet" or ...

I would be too if I was dragged out of my 100% my-own-day to look at someone’s BIG red umbrella. Adding the hyphens make it have more sense, we understand ...

Hallo dear ^.^ Like many before me I am loving your username, and Kim Possible for that matter :p I welcome you most heatily, from the bottom of my third ...

I liked this, simple and sweet. I do have some issues with it though; That you’re grateful That you’re friends with her or him, And "that" you will always be ...

When simple really was the easiest way And difficult was something only grown-ups cared for. When way-back-then was only moments ago And a minute could last longer than the day ...