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I could walk back to my foreign car no doubt amassed by some sorry soul. This makes little sense.. what is actually being amassed? Are you sure you have the ...

Hrrmmm. I rather like this. I wasn't sure I would, but then once I read it through I decided that I really did like it. Nice work on that one. ...

Okay, this is an okay poem. I can't say I like it so much, though. Your first stanza would do well to be four lines long, the second line being ...

The crisp chill of the air sent shivers down her spine as she stared at the pristine scene before her. Steely grey eyes roamed over every shimmering mound. No one ...

James sat up quickly. He had been having a nightmare. Bethany laid next to him her arm still around his neck. James slid her arm away and looked down at ...

^ Has a Pimp. < Is a Pimp. v Will wonder about teh pimps.

Rawr. Hi Sir Andy. ^^ That is all, my science brained knight. *HeartS* Le Penguin.

This was okay. I would suggest looking at capitalisation. I liked it though. It had good flow, and some nice imagery. The allusion was good too. All in all, I ...

Love these two lines more than chocolate: my mind is worth so much more than the price I'm selling my body at. Your first stanza is wonderful for drawing the ...

thank you all for taking the time to read this. And your comments are very much appreciated. Sadly I have alsways had a bit of a problem with tenses, and ...

:O Where are all those stubborn Taurus kids when you need them? I have no idea what being a Taurus really entails, but I knows I is one.

I think this is cute. If it happens, I shall also be there. :O Maybe even with a date. :p

Picking 10 Bests was *hard* so I just picked the first ones I *loved* that I came across ^^ Everyday I love you less and less - Kaiser Chiefs. Afterglow ...

Takes a deep breath. I hope you do well in the contest bbb. Hey! This is just a little thing that I wrote. I mainly focused on Eliza's look because ...

I like the flow of this. The imagery is also very nice. Some qualms though: "And we'll show you ares too" Do you mean ours? or Ares? though Ares would ...