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Hrmm, yeah, we've talked about outlines, and I just got a stack of stuff off the net about it for him to look at. Thanks Via. ^^ It's a workable ...

The kid I tutor is having some trouble with his essay writing in exams. *I* am having trouble finding the info I need on how to write faster during exams. ...

OMG They're gone! *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Friday. It’s the day that is often regarded as the best of the school week, if only because if signals the end. For one student, though, it was the most ...

I shall submit my profile as soon as can be. I can't wait. ^^

UPDATED: 20/8/2010 I remember when I first created this particular thread. Long time ago now, I suppose. Things have changed, I have changed and the world has changed so it’s ...

Emily worried. She knew her schedule. She knew all of the motions. What she didn't know was what would happen. Factoring in all of the variables would not help, neither ...

You started off really well, and I thought I was going to really like this. Then you continued and it got a bit confusing and I think you lose your ...

Okay. I don't like this much at all. To begin with I though it was going to be good, but then it just went down hill. To begin with, I ...

Okay. I like the imagery of this, and how you make football into something almost noble, and like a true battle. As one who detests the sport, American football especially, ...

Mayhap it is the sun. I'm not sure I like this. It is cute and cryptic, both things I love... but something about it chips against the stone that is ...

okay. It is *very* odd to have a poll on a poem. Though, I can tell you Pen To Paper fits the subject much better than Script does. That is ...

I can see that it means something, which is important. I can also see that the repetition is done well, and I happen to enjoy these poems. What I cannot ...

I can say that I did like the flow of the poem and those parts that rhymed did not annoy me - as they often do - so you've done ...

I think you need a little work on the punctuation of this, to start with. For instance the last line has no full stop, and need a comma before the ...