PenguinAttack

6/10 Interesting enough, I like it. ^^

Hallo Mariska! Welcome to YWS, I hope your stay here will be most enjoyable. (It totally will, this place rocks) A small suggestion (already?! Le gasp!) is in spacing out ...

Most gracious thanks Sir... this looks most fun indeed. *goes to play*

In terms of usage, I hardly ever have the need to use "ma'am" I do, however, use "sir" rather frequently. In school I was taught to use "sir" and "miss" ...

7/10 ... Lol... I just know I'm going to have to go to that ep now too. ^^

Thankyou sooo much everyone, for the fabulous crits. Obviously I did a little work on it in there, and forgot to comment at the same time... hopefully this is a ...

Thank you Stella, Amelia, I should get back to editing this as well (I have been ever so remiss in all my editing) some time in the near future. Thanks ...

Hehe, thanks Sugar, Ygaron. I appreciate your taking the time to read this, and even more so the fact that you took the time to comment. Much thanks, once again. ...

I really should remember to come back and try and finish this. Thanks to you both, Rea and Derek. I understand what you mean about the deeds... it may be ...

Thank you all for such lovely comments, I appreciate each and every one of them. Sometimes the personal - whether you liked it or not - comments are the best ...

Hrrmm... okay. I still like this, but now I think you're over-using "pull" throughtout the poem. Reading over it again, and the comments after my own... I think Cade has ...

I think, as a general rule - as Jack has pointed out many times now (I think) - if you're going to consider this you need to be over 18. ...

Le Penguin approves completely. I like the idea and hope it gets implimented soonishness. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

"Can you swim?” Igor yelled over the sound of the crashing waves against the side of the plane as Thomas and Charlie quickly clasped to the edges of the window ...

Silence rips the air as a sudden movement is caught by the eye of each person. A cough catches in someone’s chest causing a dull thudding sound. Whose turn is ...