PenguinAttack

Okay, just a quick note: “Dave awoke” awoke sounds awkward and odd here, I’d suggest using a simple “woke”. I also love the thought’s running through his head here, totally ...

ooooh I love the second! Very cute! The first is lovely too, your necklace looks like one I have. ^^

*huggles* Curves, I adore you, and you're fantastic piggies. ^^ I'm glad that homework's going well. xD

Hrrmm, I got 875 first go, but I was using something I've read over a few times, and wrote myself. On 1000 it was quite a bit harder, but I ...

Hallo there! Welcome to YWS. ^^ Fourteen muddy rangers aimed their swords towards the countless Kalbarcs. Each bearer muttered a silent prayer under their breath. Just the weak circle of ...

Le Penguin does not do mornings well: omg they're all gone. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

I like this, I enjoy the narrative itself, and like the meaning in it. I don't agree that poetry is better when not in free verse, I think it depends ...

Okay, this is sweet. It obviously has feeling in it, and I realise it is your first poem. Your problem comes thusly: You're telling more than showing. Showing can come ...

Oh, owwww. I hope you're feeling better. As well as everyone else, lol Mesh, was it very terrible? My worst injury thus far has to be when I fell down ...

Yay, on topic! ^^ How do you feel about the concept of "Gay Pride"? Neh, I don't completely see why there has to be parades and stuff, but I am ...

Ne, illegal immigration is a problem in many countries, and I – personally – only have a problem with it because it’s become illegal. Living in Australia we’ve had an ...

Snazzy glasses, Saint, dear. Rawr. :D *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Congrats Mister Universe! I applaud you greatly! ^^ And I believe I told you that you could do it, too. :p *hands party hat and piece of cake* I'll cater. ...

Well, hello there Rachel. ^^ Welcome to YWS, now you have one extra place to run to when you're stressed. I'm sure, and definitely hope, you'll have fun here as ...

I don't want this to come out wrong, but I didn't know there were so many athiests on this site. It kind of surprises me. Just to point out - ...