PenguinAttack

I see those eyes, Those eyes behind the trees. The ones that watch me, when you don’t think I’m looking. But I am. Here, I think you can completely nix ...

I like the set out of this, and enjoy the idea quite a bit, your use of alternative perspecitves is cute and interesting, something I don't see often. I also ...

Pikara bounced down the street of the seaside town, which lay nestled at the foot of a mountain. She was worried. If she failed the Final Trial, then it meant ...

Eee, this was really good, Molly. ^^ I liked the flow and the description, it moved at a steady, appropriate pace and kept within a linear outline. I couldn't sotp ...

Hey there Adrian, I like this, quite a bit. You personified time nicely and have some beautiful imagery, it all helps your poem flow, and the reader connect. The repetition ...

I like this. From the first line to the last, you have a way with statements and their endings that stab at the reader not-so-gently and allow for meaning to ...

Hello dear! ^^ Spotted your piece and thought I'd come visit. Now, I have to say, while I understand the narrative of it, and I can see the meaning... it's ...

Cute and short, as those before me have stated. The last line did indeed make me laugh, and I think even without the explanation of the French, the idea of ...

As always I become stunned by you and your work. Considering the level of depth, deceptive or not, in your other poetry, this is surprisingly easy to understand. Perhaps that ...

Hrm, well, Zus and Miya are right in one respect. A poem should be understood, considering the context of where you're posting. That said, I think I understand this, although ...

Sex Cells. It certainly does, doesn't it. You conected your title - if I'm reading it all right lol - brilliantly to the end of the poem. And the rest ...

I like this. Short and to the point. Although is the comma in the second line necessary? I read it better without it, so I was unsure. ^^ It's got ...

Hrm. I like this, although not so much as some of your other work. I enjoy the humour in it, and the solid description. But I think there was too ...

*Salutes* Still you continue to surprise me, love. This is gorgeous and cute all at once. To have so much in so little provides this little glimpse into the world, ...

My word. You make me yearn for such sparking shimers of eloquence, of clarity obscurity by the obviously hidden. It's brilliant, and intense, and full of meaning. I couldn't have ...