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Hi, Sugar. I like this one, perhaps not as much as I do the others, but I still like it. I think you do so well with description, and realism. ...

Hi Zo! "Newsworthy" I like this. It’s sweet but sad, a lovely combination. I find that the repetition of “I” got to me slightly in the first three lines. I ...

"If God gave me the chance To turn the time around, I would do it for you." Ambiguous “the” time around. I'd like to know what time, you know? If ...

Squee! Now, my family thinks I'm somewhat insane because - as you know - I did actually laugh out loud during this. You're a legend and a half. I really, ...

You walk quickly, head tucked into your coat, eyes downcast. Flashes of grey and black pass your sullen form; you have no time to look at that which provides no ...

A small trickle of water fell from the gutter along my roof and made a silver trail to the cement below. - Lovely start here. I was watching this from ...

That's fantastic. You're right, too, it's so much better with the formatting. I think it works so well with the topic of the poem, and how easily it is read, ...

Yay it's another one! I love it. James will be back, right? Of course he will be! Or I shall cry, and I'm sure you're aware of how utterly ick ...

Hello dear! I'm afraid this is going to be a little "brutally honest"... don't take it to heart, though. This is entirely a ceitique of your work, and not your ...

Oh, Gwenue! That's so cute! The Lindt bunnies are the best evar! Mwuahahahah! Not that I ate them or anything! :D *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Hi Zo! I like this. To start I saw a ring of text, you know, and I thought it was cute, and considering your title I could see how it ...

6/10 I like the colours... but it's just a horse, lol.

Oh, lovely, Sugar. If only for that last little bit, "He was my brother." I love it. As always, I find your description to be fantastic, I think you click ...

Hey there again, Gadi. ^^ Okay. So now I see your intended structure, it's a cute and interesting idea. I appreciate the meaning and the way you've proceeded with this, ...

In Australia we've inherited the *you need to be drunk to have fun* attitude of our colonial forefathers - the brits. This is rather unfortunate, but a fact of life ...