PenguinAttack

Hi Choco! So, I'm not fabulous at critiquing lyrics, mainly because I can't usually put them to music, so I don't know how they'd work that way. But! I could ...

April 7 I should take you into an embrace, though it seems hard to look at you from here, and prove to you my love. It is an alien concept, ...

Thanks Jasmine. ^^ I'll see what I can do about le cliche. Thankd for reading. ^^ Yesterday I was feeling rather terrible - and YWS was out everytime I tried ...

“I bathed in the sea, the rippling surface settling almost to my waist.” - I’d just use “waist” here, scratch “almost” “ Dancing in circles was the wind, touching skin ...

Trigger, your hair is haaaawt. Saintification... what in holy heaven's name is that horrid looking thing? o.O *disturbed* *hearts* Le Penguin.

Squee! Thanks for that Zeus. I'ma work on that now. ^^ Not sure if I like this one. Working on the emotion now. April 5 - Dedicated to Athena. ^^ ...

Hi Zeus! I'm liking all of these thus far. I think your ideas are sweet and I like how you've set out each poem. You use structure well and your ...

Thanks so much you guys! I'm really glad you liked it. How do you think the edit is, Trident? This one is.. neh, I don't like it at all, it ...

My petals of infinite petalness! I'm here today to wring you a bargain like never before! (disclaimer; bargain may have, indeed, been presented before) I am offering critiques, reviews, comments, ...

"It's a freaking senryu" I'm not sure I like the flow of this. Is there perhaps anothing poem form you could make it be? XD even if she gets it ...

Squee! Nah! *huggles* ^^ *Hearts* Le penguin.

I think I like April 1 more than April 2. April 1 is just the right length. It's neither too long or two short and I found it cute and ...

I love you both. ^^ Thanks so much! ^^ April 3. She is walking along the water, making moves that look so imaginary that you’re not sure you believe. Clots ...

Squee! Awesome, as always, my dear Minx. Mrs. Crotchet is life! My life! The life! She's my mother with vulgarity, it's amazing! *sigh with contentment* Also. Lena makes my life. ...