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Hehe. Well now, a faster read than the others, but no worse. Alex was surprisingly non-sucky, it was lovely of him to help Lena. ^^ Favourite bit: JAMES I just ...

15. - Nothing Short of a Climax... Is sad and touching and... Explicit. ^^ “we begin our study of life with the dead because everything has already left us.” I ...

I'm up for a survey! I think they're fun. ^^ Also, in Chimped Out, there seems to be - consistently for me - no Avatar pictures when you go to ...

April 16 - Cheaters. Sweet juices mingling with the vine and curling about the tongue. Blushing red, caught in the hand, they slip and hide behind bold enamel, clamouring to ...

Hey, Selene! I like the theory of this. The tree growing and shaping. But yes, you need some more imagery! That’s cool, although the new descriptions will alter the form ...

I'm glad you liked it, kinda. ^^ This is one I posted earlier. I was going to write a new one for NaPo, but this is wdo in leiu for ...

Let's leave, let's leave, in the silence of the night. The moon is in bloom and the bristling bats call, let's leave, let's leave, the night is ours once more.

Hey there, Ant. “We float, my dear, we float. And the sleeping caddisfly ventures Ever nearer to the disturbed water.” - I think you might do better to separate this ...

Hi there Kayy-tea. Firstly I would like to point out to you that YWS has a policy of making two reviews before you post any work. If you could please ...

Squee. ^^ That was awesome, dear. I love the mice, those two boys are such girls. I do really like how it came back to it in the end too, ...

After much debate ^^: April 13 The door is locked, Father Time, and naught have I but copper wires. It is you whose nimble fingers stole the world from under ...

Honest to bestsy, you're aces. ^^ - You were completly right, I was considering a structure change, wasn't sure. ^^ *modifies* April 12 Lonely bones of old maids rumble into ...

Hi there, Echolair. “Love wasn't abolished. It was bloody made in sheer fantasies of bloody unions.” - Here, I can tell, you’re using “bloody” in the sense of the swear ...

Hi Adna! “as you sing on, your melodies so sweet.” - Does this indicate one melody or more? It was slightly confusing. “Every note you sing here casts its spell. ...