PenguinAttack

Hi Mizz-Iceberg! Okay. You've a good base for a poem here, it's obviously got a point and meaning - important things in poetry. I think you'll find your problem - ...

Hehe, that's why he isn't levelling up, you know. ^^ So you won't kill him. :D Also, yay the sig! *hearts* Le Penguin.

April 26 Foolish little boy, I tried. While you, slick with promise, Whispered nothings in my ear. (You, who are the clarinet, lying forgotten on the music stand. You who ...

Hi Tale! Okay. I like what you have here, but it needs some work. You’ve got some great imagery, but it doesn’t connect to anything. You tell us it eats ...

Hello there, Sam. ^^ This is a gorgeous little poem, and you've only had two comments? (one being Saintifiction) Shocking! Not to be mistaken, I'm of no use. ^^ I ...

April 22 Split-grinned and hoarse, he whispered, "No more, no more" One pariah's proclamation, with lips pressed closed; "Live in the moment" But, what are words but slips of motion ...

I like both of these. ^^ I think 19 is sad and odd, and I'm not sure how you bring about pretty words and meaning all at once (I seem ...

Hi Selene! Okay, to begin, I like this, it’s cute. ^^ Nice work on that. I’m not a huge fan of the dream thing but you use it well here, ...

Hullo there ^^ Now, I must say, your disclaimer almost worked. Considering what I want to say and the possible reaction from you, or others, I almost decided not to ...

How many signatures are you going for? also. Sure. I'm always up for randomage. ^^ Signed. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

How can a celler door *rise* exactly? Is it like a hatch? Alos, very poetic. I look forward to the coming. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Well now, I’ve been so remiss, reading all your poems but not taking the time to comment! I’m shocking. So! Here we go. ^^ #3. Past Affairs (Edited) Something jars ...

April 19 I’m waiting again, quietly, Hiding behind the pillars of faith, The crumbling rock on which Moses stood. It’s not the same, of course, But it brings the comfort ...

I hope you're feeling better, Nate! I'll see I remember it for later on tomorrowish. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Well now, wasn't this just the piece of amazing I told you it would be? ^^ *gloats* I know all the coolest things. Anyway! I find that Line-Flower is right ...