PenguinAttack

Thanks guys, for critiquing this. ^^ I'm really glad you all enjoyed it and got something from it. Thanks again. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Thanks so much for critiquing this, guys! ^^ I'm glad you all liked it, I worked a little on it, so I really appreciate it. Thanks once again. *Hearts* Le ...

^^ Thanks, Fye! I fixed up that one line, so now we know where that breeze is coming from... sort of. xD And I'm so very glad you liked it. ...

Thanks Max. ^^ I really appreciate the review. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Her hands fluttered over the keys, never pressing firmly enough for sound, but each key touched precisely as it should. She never looked up, though no sheet music sat before ...

You've been awesome and critting a few of my poems lately, I'd like to beg another, please. < it's for a contest. Thanks. Le Penguin.

Hey dear. I'd love if you could review this at some point. Thanks. Le Penguin.

Colour, Penguin? Dogs are colour blind. t Honest to Betsy. I didn't even realise. xD I retract that one request. The rest stands. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

To Australia.

Done, dears. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Hey Tale. I’ll start with some of the little things that I found while reading through the text, a few typos, nothing too serious. She sat at the bus stop, ...

The answer to your question was clear to me. This might be because I already knew of the prompt and recognised what you were doing. I realise that the prompt ...

I understand why - your voice crackles on a dying line and I wonder where your eyes are; the sky is coughing grey, is your God crying? The broken tiles ...

Done and dusted, lovelies. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Oh dear. I do hate to sound like a broken record, which, coming after Jig and Kylan, I might seem. But they’re rather right. I was it coming, and was ...