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Re: 5 Stories for Cal's Ship Contest
Okay! So, I decided the best idea would be to go through this one flash piece at a time, aye. I think you might hate me by the end, though. ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
Hola Olivia. ^^ I’m glad you Pm’d me about this; otherwise I’d not have seen it and all. You’ve had some good critiques before me (Whatever do you even need ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Emily Jane Darcy. The room was half-full. Most were interns, pale and jittery, and the missing spaces felt very evident. Emily knew that none of her best would be there ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Some Sort of Complication. Chapter Seven
There was glass embedded in my fingertips, and I kept trying to steal the stem, rolling it over my palm and back. Peter took it away each time, frantically standing ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Some Sort of Complication. Chapter Six.
It was Peter who spoke first, setting himself down in front of me and watching. “Was there actually anything you wanted to say?” “What’s going on?” He shifted uncomfortably in ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Punch
Hey Athena! I felt the blood rolling down my face onto the floor where I was currently laid out with his foot on my chest. This is very awkward, there’s ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: 5000 posts! Woot!
Wooooooo! That's fantastic. You're awesome. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Villain [PROLOGUE]
Hello, Ember! Welcome to the YWS, as I’ve not yet met you. ^^ Hope you’re liking it here. Now, onto the piece itself. Even as a prologue, this is rather ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Some Sort of Complication. Chapter Five
Daryl was sitting at the kitchen table when I returned. The clatter of my keys on the hallway table startled me of out my day dreaming. I’d have to go ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: The Mask Maker
Hey, Boy! I’m commenting on this because I remembered you were writing it. xD *gets distracted* Well now. You have so much opportunity here, Boy. Really, it’s a right well ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: The Art of Looking Down
Kylan! Yes, I do have experience with this form. Well, kind of, I suppose. xD Sadly enough, I’d written something for the contest in this exact form too. ^^ I’ll ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Two Entries for Cal's Contest
Hi Conrad! I’m really glad you contacted me about this! Elsewise I’d have never known it was here. ^^ Now, in contrast to Kylan, I actually prefer the second to ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: New Will Review Thread
Some sort of Complication chapter one: If you would. ^^ Please. Feel free to peruse the subsequent chapters if you like, too. *hearts* Le Penguin.
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Some Sort of Complication. Chapter Four.
A woman in a red coat burst through the cafe door, panting slightly as she closed it against the wind. I grinned, watching the fading blush of her cheeks, and ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.2
It wasn’t thick enough to sit comfortably astride, so very carefully, holding onto the beam that ran above my head to the spine of the roof, she stood up. “above ...
Oct 17, 2008
