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Re: Snipits from your story.
This is toward the end of what I have so far. “Yes. Tomorrow. Bye.” She looked up, noticing Nathaniel moving to lean against the front counter, his arms folded across ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: NaNoWriMo Title!
It's currently Bare Bones, but there's a large possibility that will change later on. *Hearts* Le Penguin.
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
Is there any guarantee that those men will stay in gaol? Is there any possibility that they will get out and offend again? If you talk in possibilities, you need ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Barack Obama - President Elect
Would it be bigotry? ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
Then, what you're saying is that one individual should always be chosen over the multitudes? That in itself is a loaded argument, and you have to make sure you understand ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
I don't think capital punishment is there to teach the wrongdoer, but as an example to others as to the kinds of punishment one can/should receive for their crimes. What ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Advice for burgeoning poets
Poetry is something written for the poet. Regardless of everything people say about not writing for you, writing what people want/can read - that in itself is a dumbing down ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chapter 1
Hello there, Lord Anzius. I’ll do what I can to critique this to a good standard, but I can’t promise to critique other chapters, between university, work, and NaNo, I’m ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.4
Isn’t she gorgeous? The Raven? I mean... she’s just such a sweet and lovely being, definitely. I feel as though Morley feels for her, though he doesn’t show it quite ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.3
I'm terribly sorry this is so late, I've been a little behind on everything lately. I'm definitely enjoying this, beyond what I thought I would, to be honest. You're writing ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Your pain
Hullo, Moonglowe! I don’t believe I’ve met you before, and I see you’re fairly new, so welcome to the YWS. Feel free to ask me – or any moderator – ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Of Cheap Flesh and Produce
I believe I told you that I think this is wonderful. ^^ I do, it's not conventional in one sense - because of the direct and slightly formal speech, the ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Advice for burgeoning poets
Perhaps it is a difference in education, but I was taught things like structure and word choice and form in high school - more so now that I'm in uni. ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: muscicians as poets
I think that songs have a lot of elements that are much like poems. But it's the lyricism that is the connection, some poems have a lyrical way about them ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: 20 minute word wars
Sounds good to me. If you need me I'll be in Chat as well. xD Luck. *Hearts*
Nov 3, 2008
