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Hullo again, Kylan! I know just a moment ago (in review times, anyway) I said that hispaniola was my favourite by you right now. This hasn't changed, but this poem ...

Hi Kylan! I really liked this. I'd go as far as to say this is my favourite from you in a little while. Most particularly because I could feel emotion, ...

Jon! You didn't tell me you'd written this! I love this, really. I love how it progresses, and the terms you use. I love how it flows and I just ...

Haha, I like this! It made me smile, which is always awesome. I love the words you've used - sinew and such - and the way your poem progresses. Some ...

Hi there! I like this poem quite a bit, I love the subject matter and simple way which you've chosen to approach it. However, I do have some suggestions for ...

Hi there! I love how much emotion you have in this poem, it practically smacks you in the face the moment you start reading. Often emotion is something that poetry ...

Hi Jon! Okay. So. I think you're adorable and sweet but this is a weird poem. I say adorable and sweet because the idea of this poem is so innocently ...

Hi! Just so you know, we have a forum just for asking for reviews! It's called Will Review For Food and can be found in "Writing Resources". Here's a link: ...

Jazz Buddeh! This is wonderful, I love the changes you've made and I think it expresses exactly what you explained to me. The words you use are well chosen, and ...

I will point out that Peter writes as God's messenger and one cannot say what Jesus did or did not say on the matter, if we are to question the ...

Hi, Kylan! I do rather like this, I think it's terribly pretty and you have some gorgeous images here that I am envious of. Particularly "and the purple flowers/ sigh ...

Hi there! Firstly, I'd like to ask why you've posted this in all capitals and bolded, when it needs neither? I've re-typed your poem in lowercase, using the appropriate capitals ...

2009 happened. During it, I was on the YWS. It was pretty rad. Thanks, YWS.

Only because I love you, Curves, I wrote this in response: It all started when our predictably heroic hero, Tangent, woke up in a swamp. It was the tenth time ...

This is going to be the most useless critique I give today, Imouto-chan. I loved it. It ran beautifully, your flow was excellent and the narrative progressed perfectly. I loved ...