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Thank you, love! I fixed up the little things but I'm not sure about the line you mentioned but I'm thinking about it. I'm pretty sure she's running against the ...

There is a man with purple lips watching the fourth stall. I notice because the two women who accompany him on either side wear little clothing, their hands and legs ...

Prologue: It has been two days since I stepped outside my home. After I watched the last of the meteors flying through the atmosphere - I think they were the ...

Hi Scar! Okay, firstly I’d like to say I quite like your title. It’s been done before but it suits this poem well, particularly as “In” is indeed bracketed into ...

Hi Retro! I’m sorry it’s taken me so long to get back to this for you! In that time you’ve received many good critiques so this one will no doubt ...

I'm not sure how to comment on this, but I really just want to explain who Roland Barthes is and why you've seen him quoted and other things by him ...

Hi there! I said I was going to come back and review this, and I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get back. I like your story, it's ...

Lum! You didn't tell me you edited this! Why didn't you tell me? It's perfect now. You've hit the right line lengths and the right tone in each stanza. The ...

Semyonova BAM. I love this. I gushed to you in PM in chat about how much I love this. Against the other poems in your thread now it runs equal ...

Hi Nate! Vernon, Andy and I have all experienced the same issue today where some posts have a "needs to be approved" band over them. When you click on it, ...

Jars of Stars That night, you brought down < There is something about how many words/the words used here that is a little stilted for me, not sure what it ...

Hi! It seems like you've done something pretty brave here; you've attempted to branch out into the world of prose poetry. Why do I label this as brave? Because not ...

I got my name from... THE GODS!

i know you in a conversation that happened a year ago in comparison. you’re gone, you said, slipping away from view behind virginia – do i remember her now? that’s ...

Ma'am Fishy, your hat is to fight for!