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You know what, Gallyallyarous? I am very, very happy you posted this. So happy, even, that I can ignore that you changed your other poem to this without any warning, ...

Hi Ben! Now, I’m not too great at non-fiction (In actual fact it’s been driving me mad the last week) but I think you need more reviews on your works! ...

Hey Lums! Kyll has done an excellent and clear critique which I have no real qualms with. I agree that the feeling here, the substance, is greatly lacking. I think ...

Welcome back, Firestalker (I TOTALLY remember you! I look forward to you being on the leader boards in no time. ;) ), thechocolatewritingcat and Teddy! It's wonderful to see you ...

Lums! Firstly, lose that disclaimer line. If people take your writing literally, then it’s their issue. As the writer of the poem you only have so much influence on how ...

Clearly, I need more friends. Wooo!

I love you. Remind me to come back and tell you why when I'm not half asleep.

JON. What did you do?! That second last line is horrible compared to your previous one. Like, it's just terrible. I'm glad you've kept it in past tense (Although I ...

Joooooooooooon. I am very happy to see something new from you! First off, I love the immediacy of this, the short and hard tone and the wonderful feeling it evokes. ...

My front page doesn't seem to be updating the works section at all? Some poems which have several comments only say that they have one, and some new works aren't ...

Updated as of the 20/8/2010

The prologue is just the opening. I believe that in later chapters everything will be revealed in a nice, flowing manner - or so I hope. Thank you all for ...

Hi there! I’m glad you want honest feedback; because that’s the kind I like best. Once I’d read this, and then what was in your spoiler, I had a look ...

Penguins. :(

In the staff picks there is a link to Crush by poet Richard Siken. What do you think? Which was your favourite and why? Are there other poems you love ...