Pendragon

"They're are about a twenty minute run," I said. "When they got here, I have no clue." "We will see what we can do," the Elder said. "Thank you, Elder."

I poked my head through the brush and saw something that I thought I'd never see; humans. How did they get here, I thought. This place highly secure from humans. ...

I guess for some people I didn't explain Anthro enough. Anthro is a creature that is an animal with their characteristics, but are like animals. Their forms are like Anubis ...

In small villages spread out the world their lived Anthro (creatures that have human characteristics). They're were suclusions away from the humans who wish them harm. Trying to flee and ...

I decided not to end the chapter here I'm adding onto it and will have more on this chapter posted.

Chapter 2 I finally woke up to a poke at my tail. When my eyes opened I saw on my jaw was something clamping it shut, and I couldn’t move. ...

It's a good story, and think you should keep the names. I agree with Writersdomain sugestions, but it is still a good story.

I originaly used italics but they didn't transfer with my story, but what looks like speech should be in italics. Sorry for the confusion.

Anything that lloks like speech. The italics i was using for speech on my writing program didn't transfer. The italics are thought sppech so no one is confused.

Chapter 1 Era of Kagan Ok Draconan, you have to be more careful out here than me, my mother warned. You don’t have the element of surprise. You stick out ...

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