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Re: The Elemental Warriors Ch. 4
Kasai had left his horse at the temporary stables and was now storming through the camp. Many fires flared up and bit their masters as he passed. He knew he ...
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Re: Elemental Warriors Ch 3
Tei smelled the army long before she ever saw it. A strong wind from the West blew in bringing with the horrid smell of urine, fecal matter, sweat, and death. ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Elemental Warriors Ch1 + 2 Edited
Here are Ch1+2 edited. I have took all your suggestions and helpful tips and tried to make my story better. I should have the next chapter posted soon. Chapter 1 ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Warriors Ch2
Yochi bowed to the small maple tree and took a deep breath. Keeping his feet shoulder width he took his fist back and hit the trunk square in the middle. ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Warriors
Taking a deep breath Mizu took a step out onto the pond in her parents sacred garden. Her foot sank about an inch below the cold surface before being stopped, ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: The Anthro Society Ch 1 Perosk
Chapter 1 Perosk Perosk looked around the village from his seat on the roof of a building, but he took in nothing: his mind was elsewhere. The stone beneath his ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: The Anthro Society
The first thing I noticed was how uncomfortable it was. It felt like I fell asleep on a bed of rough rocks and laid there for hours. I opened my ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
Here is my revised version of Chapter 1 Part 1. I squinted in the bright sunlight and looked around. The Anthros of the Fox Village went around with their business, ...
Nov 28, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
Here's the rest of Chapter 1. The first thing I noticed was how uncomfortable it was. It felt like I fell asleep on a bed of rocks and laid there ...
Nov 28, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
Haven't been on a while and this is the first time I got to work on this. I couldn't find the outline so I just started over. Enjoy :D Chapter ...
Nov 26, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society: Prologue
Prologue The town was in chaos, people were running everywhere and gunshots were sounding off in the distance. Perosk’s mother was dragging him towards the forest in a rush. Perosk ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
I sat down next to Suney, and kept my ears erect listening for any noise. "So what happened to you?" I asked Suney when I noticed her wound. "Ah, it's ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
I turned around as I heard Tarkel ye;; retreat. I picked up the gun of a human I recently killed. I aimed and pulled the trigger putting a bullet into ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
A gunshot hit at my foot causing me to jump. "Well, it's to late to decide on force or stealth, they found us." I pulled out my dagger and stood ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: The Anthro Society
"I will," I said stepping forward. "I spotted them, you're going to need me to find them." "Good," Tarkel said. "Follow me." I pulled out my knife and ran into ...
Aug 4, 2007
