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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Iceberg

    Thank you so much! Yes, that refers to someone that took the time to see me for who I really was underneath all of walls I put up, and still ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Iceberg

    Thank you so much! I will take that all into consideration!

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Iceberg

    Thank you so much! The iceberg is her thoughts and it is supposed to symbolize how they are destroying her. Thank you so much for your comment!

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Father's Dream

    This poem is absolutely beautiful! I love the way that it is worded and the mental picture it creates. I can close my eyes and picture this taking place right ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Father's Dream

    This poem is absolutely beautiful! I love the way that it is worded and the mental picture it creates. I can close my eyes and picture this taking place right ...

    Dec 7, 2016


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