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I love it! wayy better than the others, not that they were bad or anything! i hate that you put a cliff hanger though -_- . other than that it ...

nice! i love the first two lines "the tears fall from my face, I've fallen from grace" but u maybe shouldve made it "I have fallen from grace" to make ...

i liked it alot. it sounded a lot like lyrics to a song! it would be awesome it was. 2 thumbs up :D

I loved it! u had great rhymes. i also like the rythm/beat that made it flow effortlessly. i could feel the power behind it as i read it! keep up ...

ooohhh lots of rhyming! XD i liked this one it had feeling in it and the slight rhyming gave it voice/a beat. thumbs up!! :D

gave me chills! soo deep! soo dark! soo great!

i liked that alot! u ARE good at love poems! i loved the contrasting between the two people.... lovely XD

great! didnt see any gramatical errors. i liked the wording. good descriptive words XD , cant wait to see wats next!

great! i give it 5 stars! cant wait to see wat happens at the picnic thing with anastasia and her dad! good wording too. just to make the chapters a ...

great wording! nice rhythm too! 2 thumbs up! :)

hannah, this was lovely. it was great, and then towards the end i was like "noo!" kinda like it was a story. its an epic! like the oddysey XD

wow. terrific. i luv how its like her innerself is the reflection, and its screaming to her to kill herself. wow that gave me goosebumps.

wow! that gave me chills. in a goodway :D ur good! keep writin!

me too!!! gots alot of emotion behind it

great job! sounds awesome already! can't wait to see how it progreses. p.s. my b-day is feb. 19th so was like his b-day is clase to mine! XD