Patrick

this was different, and this is where I clash with Brad. Just because it isn't in a standard poetic structure it doesn't mean it isn't poetry!! Good job, it was ...

For the first time in my life... I'm actually going to agree with Brad. Yep, usually me and him don't see eye to eye and I've had continuous messages from ...

I was alone, until your whispers reached me through the wind. (love this part!) I was a lone-wolf, (nice imagery) until you gently joined my pack. (like the wolf imagery) ...

in_too_deep, The best thing about this is its length. If it were shortened by an additional eleven lines, it would be even better. Frankly, this is junk, and every line ...