Patriciadean

Hi I would love to review your piece of poetry! First of all, I loved the poem. It was beautifully written. I liked how you compared the heart to all ...

I would like to review your poem: I agree with Lylas. You might want to change that first line just a little bit to give it a better flow. The ...

I think Your poem is very interesting. I like how you have words like Soft, and Warm on their own lines. it gives readers almost a preview of what you ...