Parasky

Yes, left her to lore. That is why she has a poem about herself. I'm actually thinking about just cutting out that last stanza.

Oh, and since nobody has review this yet I should ask; is that the right kind of "bout"? I mean "bout" as in fighting, but I'm not sure if that ...

Alright, here's the fixed/updated version that rhymes! Death and The Maiden Long ago in an age long past, In an oh-so-distant land, Lived a Maiden with beauty unsurpassed, Her life ...

Thanks, I've been working on the rhyming. It's hard to change the words so they rhyme, but have the story still make sense. I tried a rhyme of 1-2-2-1, but ...