Parasky

The Battalion One dark morning many years ago, A Battalion of soldiers stood in their rows. Off to war were they sent, To a strange exotic land they went. Random ...

I really enjoyed this. It was very descriptive, and the foreshadowing was amazing. You managed to tell me exactly what would happen, then how it happened and the story was ...

What I thought stood out in this poem was the emotion and the story. I agree that the flow could use some work, but overall I think that powerful emotions ...

I enjoyed this poem a lot. However, in stanzas six and seven you changed your pattern of rhyming. You went from a pattern of 1-1, 2-2 to a patter of ...

Hello, you may call me Parasky. I'm obviously new here, I found this place when I was searching for some words to use a poem I was writing. I have ...