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Re: Lucy The Whisperer
Mhmm, I agree with Kiwai-whatever-his/her-name-is ;P Interesting idea and real potential- but I don't think there's anything that sucks the reader in, y'know? Sure she can talk to animals (I'm ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: excerpt- need critique- very rough
I agree with the other reviewers on the puncuation, capitalization, and etc. (-really can't think of what else to think xD-) All in all, this has great potential and it's ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Do After Death
I agree with everyone else about most of it- it was an entrancing story, and there was a few grammer and spelling errors, but all in all it showed most ...
Aug 24, 2010
