Paranormal

Name: Ryder Age: Looks 18, though only 13 Appearance: He's tall (five-eight), with ivory skin that contrasts rather exoticly with his glacial pale eyes and copper brown hair which seems ...

Mhmm, I agree with Kiwai-whatever-his/her-name-is ;P Interesting idea and real potential- but I don't think there's anything that sucks the reader in, y'know? Sure she can talk to animals (I'm ...

I agree with the other reviewers on the puncuation, capitalization, and etc. (-really can't think of what else to think xD-) All in all, this has great potential and it's ...

I agree with everyone else about most of it- it was an entrancing story, and there was a few grammer and spelling errors, but all in all it showed most ...

Hey, don't stop yet! Dx I was drooling on your every rule LoL

o: You summed up my thoughts greatly! Bravo :o

The shadows around the entrance shifted; and a wolf stepped in to join the bar mayham. A wolf? Yes, a wolf, and it was clear he'd already been in a ...