Paracosm

Okay, so I really love this genre because of the despair and drama, but it is way overdone. I need to write this story from a new point of view ...

Ummm... WOW! That was amazing! The only thing I can say is that Eve tempted Adam to eat the fruit, but still, that was intense! Great job!

I tattle on everyone!

Very interesting story! It was well written and the dialog was very smooth! I enjoyed reading this!

Good job! This story was good, but the dialect got a bit annoying. The dialect was my only problem, the story and this character as a whole was great. Now, ...

Excellent! I loved this story and how it read like a fairy tale! It was amazing! If you don't mind me asking, what was your inspiration?

I had only known him for a year, I hate that he is gone so soon. The crazy blond with a soft tan and his gentle blue eyes. His name ...

Hello! I am new here as well! I don't write often but I love reading stuff by other people! You may call me Moe, or Shinobiinfinity, or whatever! Glad to ...

Hello! I am new here as well! I don't write often but I love reading stuff by other people! You may call me Moe, or Shinobiinfinity, or whatever! Glad to ...