Paracosm

Great haiku! Most haiku are about describing nature, which is a lot easier then expressing emotion, which you did awesome at! Read some Basho! His haiku's are amazing!

READ READ READ. Oh, and WRITE WRITE WRITE!!! Everyday! Write about things you don't think you can write about, even if it is crap, it will improve the stuff you ...

Good poem! It taught me that learnt is a word as well!

Martin from Drowning in Thirst Ya bas! If ye want to talk about minorities, take a look at me! I have to hunt people down and drink their blood for ...

From Martins point of view, the main character of my vampire novel, Drowning in Thirst, which you can read in the fantasy novels forum! Martin excepted the invitation, but only ...

Lord Voldemort and Darth Vader!

As for me, I don't rush in to things. It depends on if you and this person really get along well. For instance, the one time I decide to rush ...

Good poem! Loved every bit! The only things I would change, instead of array, I would say disarray, it sounds a bit more despairing, and you used brown twice, which ...

Wow. I'm not even going to try and read this through again and find fault. It was amazing. Thank you for writing this, and God bless you! This poem was ...

Okay! Great piece! I definitely stayed interested the whole time. the only thing I noticed was a few confusing sentences, and some grammatical errors, but those are minor! Here they ...

(This part mostly follows Aaron Schwars point of view, so I wrote it in the third person, wasn't sure how to swap from first to third, so I just did ...

Wow! Good job! I enjoyed this poem, and I liked the way you expressed the emotions! The only thing I'd change is the line: Nothing but you I need, It ...

Good story! I'd like to read more about these characters and this setting!

Good job! This was written very well, I just didn't get it!

(My inspiration for this story was a song by the band Lost Prophets called Sunshine, great song!) Exhausted, I wait for the plane from my home to the New World ...