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Snoink, Haha, good point. I'll find a suitable epigraph involving our dear wily Odysseus and waiting Penelopeia. I think the Les Mis connection was one of those things that made ...

Vox Nihili, Don't speak down to me, lecturing on the intricacies of plagiarism. Any schoolchild is well aware of what plagiarism is. Apparently though, not all are familiar with what ...

To the Star of Ithaka I love I dreamed a dream in time gone by, When hope was high and life worth living, I dreamed that love would never die, ...

Love have hope for me Love have hope for me, Let this heart find peace, Lost solace in thy spirit, To this soul’s release. Love have hope for me, Despite ...

Evi, Ignore dogs. I like what you're trying to do here, the exploration of the color palette in relation to emotional connections. Very clever. The length of the poem doesn't ...

Well, it appears an explanation, clarification rather, in in need. I've found that in this life it is the exterior dangers that hurt us, heart and soul, while it is ...

Okay, I don't think it's stylistic and I'm surprised I'm the first to catch it, but you misspelled 'slowly,' twice. Dark is messed up as well. Don't worry about it ...

Beautiful.

Hey, So I don't think I've ever posted to you before....here's to the first. Anyway, I think that if you're going to write a short and simple poem it has ...

Hello, hello, Well its been awhile since I've posted and even when I did I don't think I was ever to great at it. Nevertheless I shall try my best. ...

Well its been awhile since I've posted. There is a sad much of my life, as well as symbols and allusions, woven into the poem. Hopefully everything shows. Please comment; ...

Welcome to The Young Writers' Society Jordan. Whatever your decision, be sure it is based upon true values and not stained by meager and weak intentions. I leave you to ...

Hm...well kudos on the Old English style. I also wrote a poem in such a style, Bloom of the Rose, you should check it out. I'm curious as to your ...

The Tempest Into the arid and empty spaces of my heart you came, and my life was like a watered garden. Let us walk great beaches of water and sand ...

Wow... I see you've been "critiqued" for being cliche, but there's a sincerity and...I don't...skill to your word use and structure that brings the work to a whole new level. ...