PaperCrane

Hi, sorry can you please explain why a poem cannot sound like a letter? I don't find your review strong, and I like it that you get to the point, ...

Straight-forward, not subtle, not metaphorical, no particularly interesting words or descriptions. Ordinary.

What a horrible review, I don't know why you even bothered. Basically, you have missed the point of the entire person. Poetry does not have to be an essay, who ...

Hi, London Calling. Thanks for your comment, I do know what you're getting at re there being a lack of sensory description, basically I'm trying to write a story set ...

Could you give this one a review, or even just an opinion?

Any of mine please, need lots of feedback on them :)

Beautiful, really really good for your first attempt at non-rhyming poetry. I love the imagery, and the positive nature of the poem. There really isn't anything I would correct, but ...

You don't know it but you're white You're white like me You're tender, raw like me You survived and you're surviving Did you know you're cracked like glass You have ...

I enjoyed this story a lot, it's very sad, and I love how in the beginning there is a link to the ending, ie. the comment her mum makes about ...

This is not a complete story, it is part of a longer story, but I still would really like any critique or comments as I am not sure what I ...

Would like to just point out that it is totally ok to capitalise in a poem, if you want to

Hi River, I think your poem has loads of potential, I love the story, and I love a lot of the imagery as well. You can take this or leave ...

Thank you for that, it's actually just the beginning of a chapter of a story I'm writing, it's not remotely complete... I just wanted to see what people had to ...

Thank you Ignis, I really appreciate your review. This website does seem really useful, and there is such good quality work on here, I'm really enjoying reading other people's work. ...

Hi Layla, thank you for your comment, some of your advice is helpful and I am grateful for that, but I also find what you've said a bit patronising and ...