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Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 14.2
You are 100% on-track about Paris feeling uncertain about getting a posie because he doesn't want to deal with emotions like worry. I'm glad that came across
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 11.2
Thanks, Mea! Just to clarify, the water wasn't frozen - I just used 'shattered' to try and convey that it was very still beforehand, but I'll probably pick another word. ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 14.1
We really are gunning towards the Big Reveal now and honestly it's just going to be pain from here on in. I'm so sorry dude
Nov 24, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 13.2
honestly your reaction to Paris is fantastic because if there's anything I want from this novel it's to start screaming matches among readers who disagree as to whether he's a ...
Nov 16, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 10
Thanks, Mea! I'm with you on the 'no immediate mystery' thing and hitting the same emotional note. I hope that will start to change by chapter 12, though I do ...
Nov 16, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 10
I just realised I forgot to like this because I am a fool!! Allow me to just say that you gushing over Paris gives me life
Nov 9, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 11.1
*going of to his degas , I mean
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 11.1
Thanks Blue! No, no magic from Paris there; she just got distracted. Magic isn't something you can really do just off the cuff anyway - even simple stuff is pretty ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 11.1
Thanks very much! :)
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 59
YOU WILL GET THERE honestly I promise. it's all impossible until it isn't
Oct 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 59
Yeah, that definitely works for Red - up until now I totally got the vibe from him that he was kind of hiding behind the moral reason when really he ...
Oct 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 57.2
I mean, it seemed a bit sudden?? Especially given that there's no precedent and they've got a reputation for using dragons to fly. But it didn't feel impossible or anything. ...
Oct 6, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 22.1: Gael
Yes, I'd say so. Also, given that Gael had been beaten up and was badly shaken, it didn't feel that notable that Haka was more gentle and touchy-feely with him ...
Oct 5, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 8.2
I had to do it xD
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3
I don't think having some realistic female characters in one of your many novels is enough, personally. It's a base requirement in my eyes. But I know you draw a ...
Sep 30, 2018
