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Thank you so much! I've had a better response to this than I ever hoped. I'm definitely going to keep writing - and I hope you'll keep reading! :)

Thank you! :D And yes, even though Hildegarde is the MC I actually relate to Dante way more. I too am a complete goody-goody and my heart goes out to ...

aaaaaAAAAAAAAAAA thank you SO much!!! I'm glad it worked as an opening because it took me a long time to figure out where to start. And I'm so happy so ...

Thanks so much! I'm hoping that Hildegarde's youth and naivety is going to come across more strongly as the story goes on. At the moment she's kind her domain, I ...

Thank you so much! I'm always a bit hesitant about writing children, because it's hard to get that fine balance of making them seem childish but not making them seem ...

Thanks for the review! I've only written this today, so some of my word choices are a bit thrown on the page at the minute. As for Dante and Hildegarde's ...

Thanks for the review! This isn't actually the end of the chapter - it's only chapter 1.1, and the second half of it will be coming next week. Dante and ...

Oooh thank you so much!

Thanks so much!! I'm glad I tied the plot back into the scene sufficiently because I was worried about that. And it's always good to get a review that tells ...

To be honest, I'm not sure you need to have the bit with the cart at all? I wouldn't worry about leaving the game of tig dangling - when I ...

Haha, you're holding up pretty well, all things considered!

You're welcome! :D

Awesome! I'll go subscribe. :)

Okay, re: telling Kiernan that Clem is the Chosen One, here's a couple of ideas off the top of my head: 1) Do they have to tell him? Could it ...

Adultiest adult is a classic BlueAfrica phrase and I love it