Panikos

That means so much to hear

Thanks so much for all these thoughts! They've been insanely useful and I'm so, so glad you enjoyed reading this draft, even if I have a lot of changes in ...

Thanks for this review! I just wanna kind of forewarn you, but one of the biggest issues with this draft is that it wraps up much too quickly. I'm planning ...

You're welcome! And don't worry, I suck at responding to reviews as well, so don't feel like you have to. ^.^

*chapters, I should say

Ah, I think I might've misinterpreted what you meant by 'need' posies - do you mean why do they want/need to have emotions at all? Hopefully the next chapter might ...

Thanks for this! Just thought I ought to clarify something, though - the reason Gaiv and Vie don't seem emotionless is because they have posies. And it's not truly the ...

I think it's still the same amount of reading so it wouldn't make a massive difference. In an ideal world I'd still like a bit more mystery in chapter 1, ...

It definitely feels more like a prologue than a chapter one, imo. I wouldn't worry about it being too long, though you can certainly trim it. It's no longer than ...

Honestly, there's no problem with you just having fun and playing around with the concept. It is a first draft! Once you've got a complete version of the story, it'll ...

Thanks so much for this, Zoom

The time period is deliberately ambiguous, but I can definitely see how that could confuse readers so I may have to settle on a specific era at some point and ...

Thanks, Jabber! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - can't wait to read more of your reviews! :)

I don't think I'd have enough material for a full blown prequel but I reeally like the idea of doing some short pieces just based in the same universe. Some ...

Kesec and Daisy's dynamic is one of my favourite things about this story and it pains me that I only really get to explore it retrospectively. I'm not saying I ...