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Hi, BraidenEllis! Pan dropping in for a review. Part of my university degree is in Creative Writing, too, so it's great to hear that you're also studying it. I don't ...

Hi, WhosabellCanWrite (and mmebatman112)! Pan dropping in for a quick review. I'm going to break this review down into different areas and give you my thoughts on how you handled ...

Hi, marms. I don't usually review poetry but I thought I'd drop in for a quick critique. This is a great piece - clear message, nice imagery, well paced, overall ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Pan dropping in for a quick review. Small Comments It was alive with activity, more than a dozen men and women zipping into dragon-hide jumpsuits, prepping the fire ...

Hiya, pizzaroll. Pan sidling in to fry up a quick review. Seeing as this is a fairly short piece, I'm going to go throughit chronologically and give you my thoughts ...

Hi, Querencia! Pan dropping in for another review. "There are many mysteries in the world. Some people spend their lives trying to solve them, trying to find clues and answers ...

Hi, Querencia! Pan back again for another review. They ate dinner casually , and though Mia chatted away merrily , Mrs. Bale looking at Finnley weirdly The adverbs here are ...

Hi, Querencia. Dropping in for another quick review. Small grammar changes will be shown in blue . It wasn't that it would be hard for Finnley to get a job, ...

Hi, Dragon. Gosh, it's been a looooooooong time. I could barely remember what happened in the last chapter so I had to go back and check, but I think I'm ...

Hi, DemonGoddess! Pan dropping in for a review. I'll preface this by saying that this is definitely the best work I've read from you so far. It's paced really nicely, ...

Hi, Lightsong! Pan back to review. Glad that you decided to change it so that this was the true chapter thirteen. It works much, much better, as I suspected it ...

Hi, Querencia! Pan dropping in for another quick review. Let's get straight to it. Small grammatical changes will be written in blue . Finnley nodded. He knew. "You don't have ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Pan back for a quick review. Small Comments Two young men, guards barely older than Clem, snored gently at the table. Playing cards were scattered around them. Evidently, ...

Hi, SlobstLiketoWrite! Pan here to review, as promised. It's a pretty short scene, so I'm going to take this chronologically and give you my thoughts as I go along. I'll ...

Hi, HarshLynx! Pan back to review. This will probably be a lot briefer than my review on chapter one, as my feelings on this prologue effectively boil down to 'you ...