Panikos

Hi, lelu! Pan back again to help you kick a few more of these chapters from the Green Room. I did critique chapter nine so I just about remember where ...

Hi, kman134. I've not read any of the previous chapters of this novel, but it's been kicking around in the Green Room for a long time now so I thought ...

Yo, Querencia! I'm like a steamroller today. Don't mind if I roll on in with another critique. It had only been a few days, and Mia claimed that the nightmares ...

Hiya, Querencia! Pan dropping in again . Let's get to it! "Well, when you activate it, it begins to draw power," Mr. Vaughn explained. "Not very much, mind you, since ...

Hiya, Querencia! I'm determined to get through these! Finnley dutifully worked his way through the work — it was just like busy work at school. Can you correctly copy this ...

Hiiii again, Querencia. I'm going to try and get as many of these chapters reviewed as I can before review day is out. “It was a nightmare,” she said after ...

Hi, Querencia. Back again! He was learning how to properly draw out the spells, what the symbols meant. He had to learn the magical language a bit, which took most ...

Hiya, Querencia! Pan dropping in for a critique on this fine review day. One of us will get hurt and I’m going to feel terrible . I t’s all going ...

Hiya, Querencia. Pan dropping in again. "Here to see Emily Hart," he told the man at the front desk. "Oh, right. She's on the second floor, in room nineteen," the ...

Hi, Querencia. Just dropping in again. "You couldn't have just been one of those classic hero types whose parents abandoned you or died in a noble war? You couldn't be ...

Yoooo, Querencia. Back again. He didn’t really think it was fair that this much crazy stuff could be going on in his town and he still had to do calculus ...

Hiya, Lightsong! Sorry I've been a bit slow getting to this! Same drill as usual, with grammatical fixes in blue . Small Comments ‘How do I know you’re not - ...

Guess who's back, back again~ "Let me tell them." Monica looked dead ahead at Finnley and Mia, no tremor in her voice or her hands. "I'm dead." Aha. Called it. ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Sorry that I'm being so slow on these reviews. Small Comments Clem raised an eyebrow. “You look old enough to be his grandmother.” Wow , Clem. When manners ...

Hi, BlueCat! Pan dropping in for a quick review. I'm going to start with small comments as I read and then I'll round up with some overall thoughts at the ...