Panikos

Hey, Mage! Happy Review Day - seems like a fitting time to critique all these chapters you've posted! Small Comments Trees sprung to life on the paper, their gnarled trunks ...

Heya, Mage! Merry Christmas! Just dropping in for a quick review. Small Comments Even if he tried to ignore their contract like he had in the park, he wouldn't just ...

Hey, Lightsong! Sorry again for the delay. Everything's just so hectic and busy at the moment - I really miss the summer, when I could actually keep on top of ...

Hey, Mage! Back again to review. Small Comments For the first few moments that followed her waking up, Cass felt deeply disorientated. She groggily stared at the room around her; ...

Hey, Mage. Dropping in for a quick review. Small Comments If he had been so fond of the idea of contracts being a sign of a trust , why hadn't ...

Heya, Mage! Back again for another review. Small Comments “It's him,” she said. She raised a hand and pressed it on her chest. “I can feel it in my soul. ...

Hiya again - Mage!? It's going to take a little while to get used to that... :P Small Comments The moment after Cass spoke, silence fell upon the room. Her ...

Hey, Saen! Sorry that I've got a bit behind on this. I thought I'd drop in and set towards catching up again. Small Comments It vibrated in the air with ...

Hey, Lightsong! I got my essay draft written much sooner than I expected so I thought I'd use my free time to drop in and review. Nice to get to ...

Hey, Lightsong! Thanks for your patience. Rest assured that I'm still eagerly following this novel, it's just that between LMS and university it's not easy to find the time to ...

Hey, Saen! Sorry for another long wait. I'm still wondering when my reviewing motivation will return from war. :P Small Comments But it wasn't the glint of the metal hilt ...

Hi, Saen! Thanks for being so patient - I wish I was less busy. Small Comments Cass remained in the entrance way to the park I believe that 'entranceway' is ...

Hi, Saen! Back again for another review! How nice it is to be back up to date... Small Comments Beautiful, unfamiliar trees dotted the landscape, and picturesque wooden benches glowed ...

Hey, Saen! Happy Review Day! Small Comments And while this time might have been the most justifiable of them all, it was also the time where she didn't want to ...

Hiya, Saen! Sorry it's been so long! RevMo burned me out and university is still pretty hectic, but I'm excited to get back on track with this. Small Comments She ...