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Hey Mage! Small Comments It didn't matter that he had done it for what he believed to be the right reasons How does she know that he did it for ...

Hey Mage! How ya doin'? Small Comments But it wasn't the size that filled her with delight; it was what was contained inside of the beautiful room that made a ...

Hi, Mage. Not having the best day, so I thought I'd drop in and distract myself with your lovely novel. Just before we get started, I'll give you a bit ...

Hi, youngscribenash! Just dropping in for a quick review. I'm going to start the review with an overview of what I liked about the piece, then delve into advice and ...

Hi, JulietWrites! I haven't read the first few chapters of this, but I thought I'd drop in and help kick this out of the Green Room. I'm just going to ...

Hey, Q! Small Comments The dark shadow of the forested hills and the mountains beyond cooled him as the sidewalk turned towards home, and he flicked through some poetic lines ...

Hiya Q! So excited that you've started redrafting this! Small Comments “Hello. This blog wasn’t my idea; my therapist told me I should keep a journal before I moved, but ...

Heya, Mage! Finally caught up again. Small Comments She tried to push the thought out of her mind, but it stubbornly remained as she started to pick up the pillows. ...

Heya, Mage! Small Comments She sat down on the edge of the bed, kicking off her sneakers and resting her head on the pillow's top. Her heart said to trust ...

Hey, Mage! Sorry it's been a while. Stuff just keeps happening and it's a struggle to keep up with it. Thanks for being so patient! Small Comments She'd leave the ...

Hey, Mage! Thought I'd finally get up to date - though I suspect you'll release another chapter any day now and set me back again. :P Small Comments She went ...

Hi, Mage! I decided to review as I read which means I just saw the last line without reading the entire chapter and I am FUMING with myself because!!! What ...

Hey, Mage! Back again to review. I've got The Great British Bake Off on in the background so I'm going to have to fight to stay focused, but I'll do ...

Heya, Mage! I'm determined to get through these before Review Day finishes! Small Comments by the time she emerged from the darkness into the open field and path that lay ...

Hey, Mage! Back again. Small Comments “It's okay,” she reassured her. Her voice was shaking and uncertain, and she was sure Aspen could feel how cold and clammy her hand ...