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Haka and Gael look pretty much like I imagined! I always visualised Ilami's hair as curly for some reason, though. :)

Glad I could help! :D

That does help a bit, though I'm still hesitant to say whether you should/shouldn't scrap it when I haven't read the thing for myself. The one thing I will say ...

It's hard to say without knowing more about the wider context and the general tone of the novel. On its own, it sounds a bit cheesy, but it depends on ...

Romance is one of those things that really annoys me in fiction, because when it's done well, I will be completely invested in it and barely be able to think ...

So I did this piece for my art coursework a couple of weeks back (I didn't even need to, my teacher should give me more credit) and I thought I'd ...