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Re: When Did All This Happen? (Preface)
PREFACE. yup : ) “Moll? You ready to go?” I had just gotten down the stairs and was finishing my packing. “Yup all ready.” I looked over at Braedon, his ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Blue Bird's Blood
OMG JOSEPH! I LOVE IT. I love how it became a complete circle. How what happened to him happened to Brenton : ) That was good lol :) you're AHHHmazing. ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: So Untouched Part Two
I trotted down the steps. I saw my mother at the table staring at me. She knew something was wrong. The whole house knew that something was wrong. I cried ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: To Leave Tyler is to do What With my Life? [EDITED]
Thanks soo much! I will definaltly edit this and have you guys review it again. More will be up soon. Just be patient because i have a lot of finals ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: Tomorrow Does Not Exist - Part I
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG no joke, I soooo read this during school today!!!! I had no idea it was you!!!!! :D haha i find that quiet amusing. I really ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Angels Don't Have Wings
I want character four, but I dont have someone to do it with :(
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Angels Don't Have Wings
I want character four, but I dont have someone else to do it with me :(
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Rachel
Very cute, but a couple of things i saw... I'd always play Power Rangers with her at recess. change at to during, it sounds better :) She was always the ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of my story
oo good, I'm excited to read more! A few things... Disgusting, thought Bane when he caught the scent. He lifted his head from the carcass of a freshly killed deer ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Writing to Show
So I did this is for a school assignment. Review and tell me what you think. The objective was the show that she character is scared, not say it. Sweat ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: To Be Weak [EDITED]
Edited...again, people keep saying good opinions!! Chapter one is COMING!! stay tuned. Preface These feelings were all new. Never had I ever felt being with someone could ever feel so ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Wings
Oh my god. I'm in love with the last line...you know: "I caught some on my tongue like snowflakes; by the time they’d melted, I was in love." That was ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)
I'm confused...didn't Aaron have brown hair and blue eyes, not blond hair and blue eyes? Haha, other then that good story!!! Everyone else helped with the grammer issues so i ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: The Awakening (ch 2)
haha, thank you! But what i do want to say about the long confusing sentence thing, it is suppose to be confusing! Because Tyler is confused himself! Haha. The whol ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: To Leave Tyler is to do What With my Life? [EDITED]
DARNIT. okay so I press preview and it works. But when i go to the page it doesnt looks like it is stars again... here is a key if i ...
Dec 2, 2008