PandyBear528

A light humming whispers in my ear as the old Polyphon cranks up. I was about to give up on it when a soft, melancholy tone whipped out against the ...

Ohh!! I like this, many people have already edited and I just wanted to put that I love this song :) The Script is amazing. (:

Hey!! I really liked the beginning to this story! It has a lot of potential, keep it up!! The only thing I found in it is when you say.. I ...

Hi! This wasn't too bad! I believe that once you add a little more to it and do some of the things above users have said you chould have a ...

KD- thanks so much for your review!! I think I'm going to edit it and fix it up a bit! I appreciate your helpful criticism! I was scared someone wouldn't ...

*This is a true story, no part of it is made up. Let me know what you think, and help edit it! It's raw, because these were my exact thoughts. ...

I really liked reading this!:) it was a good start to a good story! I kinda want to know some back up for why Razhel can't talk. Was she born ...

Okayy, I really like your story so far (: I think you're a great author and I cannot wait to hear more from you (: I know I'm kinda a ...

the only other thing i see is: "Finally I get my time to be with Brian." You changed the point of view :) lol I think its very cute I ...

Good part two! :D lol I'm confused on one..thing though. What's here name? She's been said to be: Samara Samria Samaria I'm just kinda confused :P lol other than that ...

I think it's pretty good so far :) the only thing that i would change after Sunny is.. "His ears are too big for his face and his eyes are ...

wow. This is great :) I love them!! Pm when you get the rest up please! :) I'm veryy interested in reading what's more to come. I really like The ...

Okay... so everyone pretty much got the editing done.. I just wanted to comment :)) "And she turned back and looked at me quizzically, probably wondering why I was talking ...

Hey!! It's me Pandy! :P whoaaaa twist in the ending!!!!! Omg. lol I really thought they were together or something!! Sister?? Hope you explain that laterr :) PM me when ...

omg... You have to keep this going. I love it!! It's soo sad! But Ian sounds adorable and I love how Kali trusts him. Is Ian the same age?? Hmm, ...