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Re: Sherlock Holmes - We Laugh Indoors
Hey, Listen, this was stunning. So beautiful. Ive read it about three times now, even aloud, and its amazing. It needs a better word.. I cant find it.. but its ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Detective Manpuddin on "The Explosive Tomato"
manpudding!!! you are now my all time favourite writer :) :) i loved this!! your crazy little awesome imagination is pure genius!! DONT EVER STOP WRITING :)
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: A Halted Heart, Prologue
Hey Lily :) I enjoyed the story, and the idea, but it is very very descriptive. If that was your objective, then very very well done. Although, if you intend ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: It Means Nothing
Why hello there :) Firstly, 'Shred it to pieces' is just so harsh ;) I think most of us understand what its like to post those pieces that aren't the ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Without Keys
why hello there :) I really liked this piece. Your characters were amazing, especially Ashley. You introduced her so well, firstly with the picture, and secondly in your opening paragraph ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Forgiveness
kelle, this poem was amazing. It has touched me so deeply. I feel it, and Ive never read a poem that could make me feel as much as what this ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: A Woman Plays Poker
Hey hey! :) Im really beginning to see what you meant by "show-dont tell" :smt001 thanks for the advice :smt001 I really enjoyed this story, and sensed the urgency for ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Silence
hey man :) You're not untalented :)just thought Id tell you :) writing is a place where you dont have to be good :) it loves you anyway :) DONT ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Close, But No Cigar
hehe I loved this :) you got the bad-ass of Vince down perfectly! it was an awesome situation, especially since it was about books ;). I thouroughly enjoyed it, and ...
May 9, 2010