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Thanks for the comment. Due to the topic, little word changes can change a lot of the meaning. The reason I have has instead of had is because I don't ...

Thanks for the review. It is more of a piece about wisdom and how wisdom is the primary goal. Also, some of the corrections you suggested would change the intended ...

I feel like a lot of people can relate to this quote: ‘Love wasn’t meant for me, I got better things to go on for’

I really enjoy your writing style. I think you would be able to write good works of literary realism.

I would cut off the last two sentences. The rest of the story kind of implies them.

I think some dialogue with the cat in the tree would enhance it. It would give a chance for more of a theme to develop.

Liesonlies, first of all, if you are going to be blunt, be blunt with constructive criticism,for example, say what could be made better. Simply saying you have a distaste for ...

"glance me"--should be glance to me