PandaRawr

This was really good. I liked it bunches because it flowed well and had an effortless yet serious "air" about it.

This was a really good poem. The thing I usually find in poems is that they may have an idea but if you give it to me its hard to ...

This was something like me. My attitude may seem like I think I'm better than everyone else but truly I just want to stick out like an ugly in new ...

"Nelissa, do you have last nights math homework?" I turned around to find my best friend Morgan Green's pleading gaze on me. "Yeah, you need it?" I asked her with ...

Usually I don't care for stories set up like this where you have multiple POV's. But this one was interesting because they were so different. It was realy good because ...

His black hair falls over black eyes. A glance a way I dare fills my stomach with butterflys. I watch him from afar I keep my feelings at bay. On ...

I realy liked this peice. It was raw emotion, and awesomly written. I enjoy reading fiction but this was something real and it cuts down to the brutal honest truth ...

Morgan this was awesome. I've already said this, but I love this story! Post more soon.

This was very good and I enjoyed it very much. Though I can't think I got a little lost withthe china dolls bit. I didn't quite understand it and it ...

Wow. Usualy I'm very critacal, and have a long review, but today my review is just, wow. I loved it and the tragic ending with an inch before their final ...

This peice is better where puncuation is concerened. As I've come to expect from you, the poem is very real, and well written. The idea is so basic that it ...

Wow. I can see you are a very good writer and will be very popular around here as we love writers with talent. This piece is so common amongst us ...

Usually when one writes a peice as long as this one about one subject the writer repeates himself. Which gets on my nerves, but you didn't. This was very honest ...

This was not the best story I've seen. But take into consideration that I am hardly ever really impressed. Writing can always be improved. Obviously no one can be so ...

This is a very good start to a best-seller if you decided to make it a novel. Of course there are the usual typos, which are number two enemy, right ...