PandaRawr

First off I'm not going to say I'm sorry for your loss, or I know how it feels, or even it'll get better. I recently lost someone and I know ...

This was a really great poem. It felt complete, like you botteled all of howsomeone feels into thoes words. That is hard to do. Of course there were a couple ...

This is just a prolouge. Rae ant Taylre are best friends. AAat sleepovers they do normal girl stuff: like makeovers, talk about boys, and make fun of the other girls. ...

Your poem kind of went this way and that. You strayed off of your topic. I liked the last stanza, but this could used some work. Keep Writing

Ok. So this poem's basic idea was a little lost to me. I bouldn't grasp onto it. There was not a time when I really got hooked on this poem. ...

This is really true. People who ignore the bad shit that happens in the world, ignore half of the world itself. To truly appreciate the light we have to accept ...

OK so I wrote this when I was trying to study science and just couldn't. The fire did not howl and crackle It did not roar up quickly, consuming everything ...

So I wrote a poem first and then the prolouge to go with it. When love an hate awaken the dead the world will be silent. The birds will not ...

Ok. So far this story is good, and it has potential to be great. I really am in love with the idea of best friends falling for each other. I ...

Wow. This was really good. The others pointed out the mistakes so I'm going to give you one piece of constructive criticism. There is not enough! I really liked this ...

I believe this was a really good peice. I've never thought of it from that point of view. Although my family has an abusive and drunken background, I would not ...

I really like this. There were parts were it could be better, but it was a goo beginning. The idea may be cliche, but life is cliche. Nothing ever happens ...

When I read peoples work I don't look for spelling or capitalization errors. Others do that well enough. If I did too I would just be another voice in a ...

You walk away without knowing the pain you leave behind. You don't know that when I laugh at your jokes, or smile when you look my way, it hurts. Because ...

This was really good. You described it so I felt as if I were sitting there wathching the twilight pass on, and thinking of a past lover. The flow was ...