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Once again Sol, you have blown my mind. I almost got bored with this because it was a cliche valentines. Did I mention I can't stand valentines? No? Well, I ...

This was very neat. I didn't expect it to end so and that is good. But I would like a little more depthfrom the speakers POV. How does he/she feel ...

Wow this was some stuff. I really liked the characters. The forshadowing type you used usually gets on my nerves but you use it well here.

Well. This certainly had some emotion. That's good. I really enjoyed this peice, and wish I could give you a proper review but I'm tierd as Hell. Bye now.

You are really good. To put so much feeling into one little part. You didn't use sensory overload and you used real characters. Not the perfect *couldn't think of getting ...

Oksy this is my critique. It was to short! I'm really starting to fall for the characters Tristan esp. I want more. Please send me a message when you do.

Well being my age I've read a lot of books with graphics much more descriptive than this. I have no problem with it and can skip that and go to ...

[s]This is hard to understand. Well, not truly, but I fear it is hard to review on. This peice could be very contridicting. True, there is no momentum or change ...

Wow. This has some serious emotion going on. Now I'm guessing three things. Either your pessimistic (I'm with you), something bad happened and you are not to happy with "life" ...

The slip of your tongue. The turn of my world. The treachery undeniable The consequence unavoidable. I loved you so. I gave you all. You gave yours to someone new. ...

This was short and powerful. The message is clear and the descritions were great, but if I were writing it I would put more emotion into it. Obviously this is ...

Well generally as a reviewer I try hard to work on storyline and not grmaaer or anything. There were a few of thoes mistakes but I wont focus on thoes. ...

Harsh. I love it. Its a nice change from the usual main ideas most chose to write on. Its bold to say "This country,a place of brotherhood among free men,is ...

I struck the match. I struck out. But your flame so bright, compeled me to strike again. And for a moment, it lit. In that moment my life was full. ...

This is a little corny,the theme is overused, and I absolutly love it. It's one of thoes "If I can't have you noone can." type things. The word corny is ...