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Prologue There was maybe fifteen of them. You didn't find many children on the streets of New York who cared about the earth. But those fifteen would turn into so ...

Burning down, burning down lost now what once was found. Tears to prove that I feel, tears to define what is real. I clung to a light in the middle ...

Hi there! I loved what you were doing with this and appreciate your help to raise awarness. First I do NOT comment on commas, I tend to stay away from ...

I LOVE this. One nitpic. You said the words are choppy and do not flow smoothly but they in fact did. the story that was being told ebgulfed my vision ...

Chapter 1 The Lakeside Pact. That was what we called it. Us three eighth grade girls, well on their way to freshman year, decided to get back at some of ...

Well this was a good peice. I loved the way you ended it. the whole baby dying thing was a good twist, but the last line was perfect I think. ...

I really liked this! Dark, seductive, and intriguing, it grasped my attention from the first stanza. Can't wait to read more Always-Writer

these are great Wow I love these! I liked the first one the best but they did go good together. _Always Writer

Ummmmmm....not ment for grammer or spelling

One thing I'll point out. I never ever post on grammer or spelling unless it is just plain stupid and someone hasn't already. Truthfully I don't even look for it. ...

Have you heard of "Going Green?" You probably have unless you've been under a rock your whole life. They tell you that we have to save the earth. They tell ...

Wow, I can relate to almost ever line of this. Especially the parts refering to be a sore loser because I can't stand being wrong! this was a good insight, ...

When I read this it seemed real. I put two and two together with MattLangg and dear Matthew. I think the fact that the letter was to yourself was the ...

I call, I scream, I shout a name. But who can I trust, just who can I blame? My burden so heavy, my heart unsecure. I'm sick of this now,how ...

This is interesting. I wasn't sure the message you were trying to send here, but it was written well. I loved it for some odd reason. I enjoyed it of ...