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Re: London Time
Time is such a tricky thing my day begins and yours comes to an end. The seconds fly by, vanishing into eternity. Alone, seeking, longing, it's what I am. Every ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Purple Tulips
Again I like this very much but can't say anything that sounds in the least bit knowledgeable about photography. Sorry if I'm not much of a help :/
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Photography: Peeking through the Pink Forest
I will say I don't know the first thing about photography but the picture is really nice. I like it a lot.
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Leave
This threw me off a little. At the beginning you seemed pretty friendly with whoever you were talking to but at the end it switched almost to hate. I think ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Nameless- Prologue
I saw a couple of grammatical errors but I like to review more on the story itself. It was amazing. I love the characters and the story, even though I ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Devourer of Souls chapter 2!
Chapter 2 The study was covered with wall to wall bookshelves on three of the walls, floor to ceiling. There were hundreds of books in this room alone and Grandfather ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: April
I really think this was quite good. I thought it needed more of a story, some history, or to be longer, that was only because I wanted to read more ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: This Angel is About to Sin
At first I thought this needed more backgroung and history. Then i read it again. I really think it works this way, and I enjoyed that it wasn't basically porn ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: The Demon Within
I really liked this, especially the ending. It was great. The countdown from five had my heart racing and when he said one it was like being thrown off a ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Fireworks
I love lay on a blanket and watch fireworks, or I did. You have changed my mind. This is very real. People have changed over the years but there will ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The Devorantem Animarum (Latin for The Devourer of Souls)
Prologue 10 years ago Grandfather was a bit of an odd man, but I loved him and never believed when the kids at school called him crazy. Sometimes though, he ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
I really enjoyed this. It sounds just like what i'm going through at the moment. I can not ever say how much this means to me and for the moment ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: My Existence
I really liked this. The dramatic tone was better than most I have read because it didn't seem like the POV felt sorry for him/her-self. I have no nitpicks. Continue ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
I looked into the Silver Lake and my soul was layed before me. For the lake was but a mirror, of what layed inside one's self. What I saw was ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Ode To....
I will admit, you had me from the start. Once I tasted you there was no going back. Just sweet enough to balance out the bitter, your my "exact brand ...
Jun 29, 2011
