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Re: So Many Memories.... Aren't There?
Wow that was great. And My world is right again. This may sound sexest but evey guy I've ever met are nothing like the guys on here. These guys are ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Your Smoke
What I came to romantic short stories looking for was not this. But it did, in a twisted way, make me think. Not all romances are gushy or sentered around ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Apocalypse Of Indecision
Wow. I am ashamed of myself. As a writer I stand firm in my belief that every piece of art, wich writing is definetly, has room for improvement. This peice ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Unus
I loved that you were so descriptive in the setting as to where the reader got a detailed picture, but not so that you drew the attention away from the ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Siesi's Story-can anyone think of a better title?
I realy did like the story. I'm in love with the idea of love considering i've never been in love, and you captured one of my faorite sory-lines. star-crossed lovers ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Ok, I'm not good at poetry, and I wrote this at midnight and i was sleepy. But the words were going around in my head and wouldn't leave me alone, ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 2 (Draft #2)
I realy liked it. There were a couple of dramatical mistakes, but they were pointed out above. I'm not going to repeat them orthis whole review would be a big ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Eternal Night chapter 1 and 2
So bare with me on the first chapter. it gets better. Normally Strange 1 School. It’s boring and old and I’m tiered of it. Tired of the constant schedule. Tired ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Alone I Stand: Chapter One
Wow sakin. I really liked this one. Are you going t post more? Tell me if you do.
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Black Moon
OK, so i found this in the bottom of a folder of things i had wrote a few years ago. Out of all that was in there this was the ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Fate: Chapter one
So I took into account that you wanted me to develop the tyler character and so i am going to add a little scene between him and jessica before the ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Hero
I realy liked it. Any writer who reads this will have a story put in thier head. I must ask where did you get the inspiration? Do you have a ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Fate: Chapter one
Chapter One There was a monster right in front of me. It stared at me with unblinking eyes. I sighed and looked at my reflection for one more second before ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Sorry but i disagree with Griffankeeper. If you write for an audience and not yourself your not a writer. Writers are the ones who write because they love it and ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: my new drawings!
i realy liked them. And i think its great that you used the pokemon.
Jul 16, 2010
